The Sword of truth its way through hacks
Not time nor tide can block its rise
Pretense that builds castles of wax
Sugar that coats and hides the facts
Cloaks that deceive and shields of lies
Not time nor tide can block its rise
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This post is my first attempt at an ancient French poetry form called triolet (ABaAabAB). You can learn more about triolets here. This post has been posted for the picture prompt at Magpie Tales Edition 58
25 comments:
Though I dont know much about poetry.
(in fact got to know about triolets here only)
very nice attempt. All the best.
Wise words. They say the truth can make you free.
You know...I hope your words are true...I sure want to believe them. Great message and great execution here. Enjoyed this very much. Thanks for visiting my blog recently. Vb
words of wisdom,
powerful words...
A++
Thanks a lot for your comments, vhjamdar, Tess, versebender and Jingle.
@vb - At least I still beleive that truth finally tiumphs.
I had never heard about triolet, and now I have. I love your words - they are so true. The truth always comes out at some point. Well done.
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Nicely done ... (times three)
Thanks a lot absoluteplaver and Helen.
Wise warnings of truth, hacking away at deception. Well done.
Thanks, reflection.
My fav form !! Been long i wrote one though .. And the poem is perfectly written - both form wise and content wise :)
Yes, it suits perfect the book series too ;) Do read it ! you will love it to no end :)
Thanks for the comment on my blog !
Very well written.. Nice attempt on the form..
Very well done with the prompt- I loved it!
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Brilliant take!
Anna :o]
truth like love wins in the end...
Thanks, Lady Nimue,Olivia, HyperCRYPTICal, Brian.
nice triolet--you work your message into the form quite well.
Thanks arspoetics
I enjoyed it so much... liked the way you have used the sword of truth... Thanks for sharing...
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Thanks a lot, Girl with a red bag and Shashi.
wise words
Thanks iambeingme.
wise words
My fav form !! Been long i wrote one though .. And the poem is perfectly written - both form wise and content wise :)
Yes, it suits perfect the book series too ;) Do read it ! you will love it to no end :)
Thanks for the comment on my blog !
nice triolet--you work your message into the form quite well.
Wise words. They say the truth can make you free.
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