Hush


Cold hush sweeps the land

Frozen water shining says

Time for reflection




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28 comments:

Reflections said...

Simple, beautiful, mirroring the icy rage of waters.

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

Lovely haiku!

saya said...

Awesome imagination .. Like it :)

Helena said...

Nice...Thank you for visitng my blog and for your kind words. I'm new to the blog world, so any interest is appreciated.

♥ ஆεlεɳa ~.^

The Fool said...

Thanks a lot visiting and posting your comments, Refelctions, Madeleine, saya and Helena.

Reflections said...

I too was working on a Rondel... check out my site for a newer poem.

trisha said...

crystal clear mirror- behold yourself.

beautiful.

trisha
http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/03/28/free-soul-28-3-11/

Jingle said...

beautiful..

The Fool said...

Thanks Jingle.

The Fool said...

Thanks Trisha.

Arti said...

Indeed! What a beautiful haiku!

lonelyrecluse said...

Admittedly I'm not the biggest Haiku lover in the world, but I like it, good read.
The Lonely Recluse.

Jingle said...

amazing, welcome to poets rally.

:)

Have FUn!

JamieDedes said...

Nice! I like the "time for reflection" combine with a photo of the sea. Fine contribution to Poets Rally. Thank you! Hope you enjoyed your visits and visitors.

The Fool said...

Thanks a lot visiting and posting your comments, lonely recluse, Jamie and Jingle.

Vinay said...

its like winter of our life is a time for reflecting.. the hush doth speak volumes at times :) nice one Karthik!

Buddha3074 said...

Excellent write!

The Fool said...

Thanks, Vinay. I am glad you could read the philosophical meaning I was trying to convey through this Haiku.

Thanks Buddha.

Someone is Special said...

beautiful fool..

Someone is Special

The Fool said...

Thanks, SIS.

beccagivens said...

Beautifully penned ~

The Fool said...

Thanks beccagivens

beccagivens said...

Beautifully penned ~

Arti said...

Indeed! What a beautiful haiku!

saya said...

Awesome imagination .. Like it :)

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

Lovely haiku!

Nefariousx said...

This was well written. The last line was really great imagery. Great work.

The Fool said...

Thanks a lot, Nafariousx.

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