The strong smell of decay seemed to be getting closer by the minute and the wind was blowing more strongly. They rushed on. If they did not get out in the next couple of minutes, they would be struck in this land for the rest of their lives. This indeed was an extremely unpleasant proposition given their experience in this land so far. And they knew what the smell was. They were being pursued. If they faltered a bit, they would be taken into captivity again and bundled back to their prison cell.
The next moment they suddenly saw a gleam of sunlight
breaking through an opening in delight. They ran towards it. As they were about
to come out of the opening, a shadowy demon like form popped up in front of
them and blocked their way. This must be one of the land’s denizens that they
had not been able to see so far. It was interesting to be able to see one but
interesting things were not always nice: definitely not when they stood between
you and freedom. They wondered what to do. He looked too menacing to even think
about fighting their way through.
As they stood thinking, Sneezy resolved the issue for them.
He gave one loud sneeze. “Achoooooooo!” The creature was swept out of the way
and the children jumped to safety. It was a moment none too soon for when they
turned around there was complete emptiness behind them. The land had
disappeared. For a moment the children reflected in horror, what would have
happened had they been held up even a second more. They heaved a sigh of
relief, thanked their stars and slowly headed towards the gnomes’ burrow.
“We must have been away for ages. Our parents must
definitely be looking for us by now. When they find us, we will be in deep
trouble unless we tell them about this cave and the strange lands. Either they
won’t believe us or completely forbid us from coming here ever again.” Ramya
sounded very mournful.
“How much time do you think has passed?” Vinod turned to her
with a flourish of a professor asking the class a smart question.
“I would say it has been hours and hours, maybe even days.”
“And how many times did Sneezy sneeze?”
“Well…”
She looked at him surprised. "You mean just an hour has
passed in our world?"
“If Sneezy’s biological clock is still working.”
That was one more problem solved. They even had time to stop
by at the gnomes’ place for a snack. By now they had become firm friends with
the gnomes. Nothing like an adventure to cement bonds between people! Even
Grumpy no longer seemed to resent them. And Dopey, Sleepy and Bashful, the more
silent gnomes also spoke to them now and then, at least to Navneeta who looked
sweet and kind.
“Ajay and Sneezy are the heroes of our story, eh?” said
Ramya.
Ajay did not look too happy to talk about his role in the
whole episode. But he knew Ramya would never let it pass. Damn her!
Bracken sat quietly in a corner. Naveneeta and Bashful sat
on either side of him, passing their hand lovingly over his soft fur. Sleepy
was fast asleep.
“I hope you have learnt your lesson from this episode,” said
Grumpy.
“All is well that ends well. Ho Ho Ho!” laughed Happy
“Sleepy has seen that the next land will be the land of games.
That is not an entirely safe land but we should have an interesting time, if we
are prudent,” said Doc.
A faint smell of cheese wafted in. Slowly it became
stronger. Then suddenly it turned to the smell of musk. It was so delightful.
They were involuntarily drawn towards the smell. As they walked towards it,
suddenly it turned to the smell of rotten fish. They turned away in disgust.
Then suddenly they began to get a smell of cheese again. What was happening?
Had the creatures from the land of odors come after them? But they thought the
land had gone away. And why were they giving out so many different kinds of
smells?
They heard a scurrying sound. They turned around and found a
small cute mouse like creature in front of them.
The Magical Cave I: A Cave in the Hills <<<< The Magical Cave VII: A Foul Turn of Events << >> The Magical Cave IX: An Intriguing Problem
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The Magical Cave I: A Cave in the Hills <<<< The Magical Cave VII: A Foul Turn of Events << >> The Magical Cave IX: An Intriguing Problem
Picture Credit: http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/0/01/Comte_(cheese).jpg
12 comments:
Hi.. how are you .. just came over ot say hello at the moment will read for sure .. I am trying to get back to blog's after so many many months
Remember me :)
Bikram
Now I'm curious, where did this mouse came from?
Interesting. It does remind me of Enid Blyton
Purposely left that hanging in the end to maintain interest for next episode.
Thanks Jaish. This series is my dedication to Enid Blyton.
Hi Bikram - Been a really long time. How are you doing? How come away from Blog-o-sphere for so long? Welcome back.
Ah! So you leave us with a cliff-hanger
Thanks Suresh.
Make the chapters longer
*sulks*
Lol. Isn't this music to a writer's ears? I wanted to write smaller ones and more frequently. But somehow missed out this week due to work at office,.
No no seriously, they're too small for the cliffhangers :( so yepp longer ones please!
Right. Guess it does ruin the flow of the stort. Let me see.
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